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Random painting, 40 minutes done in photoshop cs2

Inspired by a song:
Joe Satriani - Just Look Up > [link]

rough sketch:

Thanks for looking :)
I like this. The composition could be a bit better if you were to extend the bottom length just a bit. I also feel that the brush stroke can be a bit too hard at most area, a good balance of hard and soft control would definitely improve the focus of the piece.

Colors in this piece is great, although the bottom part tends to feel muddy but it kinda suit the mood somehow.

I have very little to say about the anatomy except for the nit picking part, the fingers which really is not the main focus so we don't have to detail it, perhaps just improve the shape and silhouette would do.

Overall, it's still a nice piece. Well done!
What do you think?
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6 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

Again, I love your stuff and can't wait to work with you. I love the blurring on foreground, the simple bleed off towards the bottom and the overall weight to the character. Not a big fan of the hand/forearm. I almost thing it should not be there or in an more interesting pose. Or I would have like to see that much tighter. If it was showed the same amount of attention as the face there would be a consistency to the her skin and that might be pleasing to the eye.

But great piece overall. Once again you showed your eye for design and striking imagery.
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ales-kotnik Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well done man!
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