The idea of the picture seems interesting, but I don't like the way it is painted. It should be more clear up. The style of the young woman is pretty good. Her eyes are black which means that she is some kind of a demon, I like that element of the painting. I think that if you had spend some extra hours working on that painting it could become pretty awesome, it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect. All in all, it is piece of art... Nice work aditya777 My advice: DON'T STOP DRAWING!!! : )
Critique by ~TheBoyIAm "The idea of the picture seems interesting, but I don't like the way it is painted. It should be more clear up. I think that if you had spend some extra hours working on that painting it could become pretty awesome, it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect."
-> "It should be more clear up." -> "it just need more specific details which will make it looks more real, more perfect."
DO NOT, i repeat, DO NOT ever listen to critiques/suggestion like this.
As far style goes, it's the matter of taste. He might not like it, I LOVE IT. It's like you would be using palette knife (i don't have an idea how you achieve that with Photoshop). It doesn't need to be "more clean up". It is more than obvious what it present. You don't need to "spend some extra hours" and it doesn't need "more specific details". Painting is finished when artist feels like he don't want to overdone it. Pictures with brush and pallete knife strokes have tons more filings than overfinished photo-realistic paintings where you don't know if it's painting or photography.
However, everything is the matter of taste. Some people don't see painting finished if there is no "details". And they usually like paintings with tons of details even if painting doesn't have feelings, story, good composition, color contrast,..
No one can tell you what you should do and how. Your art is great, just because you do it in your way.
I love It!!!!!! How do you archive so great strokes in photoshop????? please tell me!!!Love the real paint feeling and the color scheme, it have a great element comp... the orange ornaments in the hair takes you to the face in a sec. and don't let your sight to fall from the picture at the same time. Sorry if I misspell something, english is not my natural language.
sering dapet commission gitu ga? lo bisa painting2 ala artgerm ataw si ahbiasaaja ga? kayanya bisa deh.. kalo bisa, mau dong kirimin porto2 lo yg setipe itu.. kayanya studio gw lagi butuh painter gitu deh.. syapa tau kita bisa satu studio..
Lumayan ada walau sedikit, tp lg ga tertarik sama commision, wal. Soalnya gambar2 gue cuma sekedar hobi dan kurang menarik kayaknya, alias ga pede. Pengen sih bisa satu studio bareng lu, tp masalahnya gue dah kerja di honda, wal.. Udah 9 thn sayang kalo gue tinggalin, sayang gajinya juga siih, wkwkwk. Gue kerja di bagian desain motor khusus asia tenggara. Kalo ngajakin collab mah mau2 aja gue, hehhee.