What I liked about it: The colors are very complimentary, the anatomy is perfect, The strokes look like like you actually painted it rather than using a paint tool, the lips are very full, the lighting is very consistent, the originality of it is very clear, you send this very enigmatic message that kind of makes the observer linger, you use the smudge tool very well, and the focal point is alittle off but doesn't effect it and it's a very beautifully produce drawing.
What could use improvement: The focal point, as I stated, is a little off. you have all these overwhelmingly bright colors, the background contrasts alot with the wings, and you make this piece so overpowering to the eyes and the focal point usually is the thing that sticks out. what ends up happening is alot of people end up, instead of looking at the neck or lips, will travel down to the character's stomach or bust as the focal point which is a place that lacks any of the beauty. Another thing that strikes me is the neck area. you chose the wrong palette, in my opinion, for showing that it is lit because it is to the point that the area looks raw like a rash which takes away from the beauty of the piece as well. I'd suggest maybe choosing a brighter color palette when depicting light next time, or maybe even a blue shade.
Overall: The piece is great, you're definitely, without question, a very good artist with the potential to make a living with your work. as we speak in fact, I'm adding you to my watch list. Keep up the good work.
AMAZING!!!!!!! I love it! how in the world did you get that idea!? I love how the fire behind her looks like wings! (and this critique thing wants me to write the great american novel! I dont want it to be so long!) hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi Im just putting random things on here so I can send this thing lalala la la la la ahhh gaboogle! dead banana fish!! that was just more random stuff anyway this is an amazing pice of art! well done! bye!
This is a very interesting, but really beautiful piece... it caught my eye right away. I think what I love most about it is just the use of color and also your painting technique... so many of the little swirls and such throughout remind me of the bristle texture of an oil work when I look at this, which is always a great thing. In any case, very lovely work!
What could use improvement: The focal point, as I stated, is a little off. you have all these overwhelmingly bright colors, the background contrasts alot with the wings, and you make this piece so overpowering to the eyes and the focal point usually is the thing that sticks out. what ends up happening is alot of people end up, instead of looking at the neck or lips, will travel down to the character's stomach or bust as the focal point which is a place that lacks any of the beauty.
Another thing that strikes me is the neck area. you chose the wrong palette, in my opinion, for showing that it is lit because it is to the point that the area looks raw like a rash which takes away from the beauty of the piece as well. I'd suggest maybe choosing a brighter color palette when depicting light next time, or maybe even a blue shade.
Overall: The piece is great, you're definitely, without question, a very good artist with the potential to make a living with your work. as we speak in fact, I'm adding you to my watch list. Keep up the good work.
bye!
- Morvena
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