I really enjoyed this piece, but there were a couple things that threw me off a bit while I looked at her. Her right armed gauntlet seems a bit more 'crisp' than her left, making it stand out significantly more than almost any other part of the piece, which makes it seem like an odd focal point.
Second was her pants, which look like blue jeans. I can't deny that it threw me for a hard loop, as everything about her screams Renascence, but then you're pulled from character immersion by asking 'are those jeans?'
My final critique is the background, which is a harsh focus. The portion near her head looks like rolling smoke, but contrasting it roughly below, are dim but jagged lines running vertically, which are a little distracting. Aside these minor critiques, I can honestly say greatly enjoyed the piece, and particularly how the cape looks natural and as though it is real fabric, good work ^_^
So i think you were trying for it to be an anime character but her face realy does not look very anime but i see lots of elements, so i would actually say make it more anime, i am an anime lover so that is my opinion. also the armor is a bit unreal for a knight, i know about sexy, but protection for a medieval knight is far more important than having your oppenent looking at clevage, lol, but to me i am not a perv so go with the origional knight armor, you can still make it a female style armor with the same protection.
[link] yes it is Joan De' Arc from BladeStorm 100 years war very sexy, yet protective, but nice work.
the 2 tings i like the most knight... no wait that doesn't sound good xd let me put it different female knight are better then the male ones just look at claymore good example
Second was her pants, which look like blue jeans. I can't deny that it threw me for a hard loop, as everything about her screams Renascence, but then you're pulled from character immersion by asking 'are those jeans?'
My final critique is the background, which is a harsh focus. The portion near her head looks like rolling smoke, but contrasting it roughly below, are dim but jagged lines running vertically, which are a little distracting. Aside these minor critiques, I can honestly say greatly enjoyed the piece, and particularly how the cape looks natural and as though it is real fabric, good work ^_^
[link] yes it is Joan De' Arc from BladeStorm 100 years war very sexy, yet protective, but nice work.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.