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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Anyways. GREAT piece. The bike looks awesome, fantastic illumination, very nice palette. I love how you played with the perspective and how you portrayed the whole thing.
Overall, a rather strong work, very detailed, except for the background, specially the whole sky to earth change.
One can see the brush strokes there very clearly; that should never happen.
Also, some pieces of dirt coming off the ground because of the friction of the tires could have made this work even more surprising.
Another thing; the bike, while looking great, is still too similar to the original, a few changes would've made the design have more impact and less predictable. Maybe give the bike a samurai-like theme to match the katana. Nice colors, though.
I wanna finish with the hair. It looks very nice, I think long loose hair could make the design shocking-er, but maybe that's just me having a thing for long hair... :3
Anyways, it's amazing. You managed the complete theme very smoothly, and the final work is not too far fetched from the original sketch; that's almost always good.
Good job.
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